A poem, by my 8 yr old son , Billy .

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December 13

A poem, by my 8 yr old son , Billy .

Hello world x This is a poem my little boy wrote , i thought it was so clever ( and funny) i had to put it on my space for you to read. I'm sure it will make you smile x

CHARLIE AND THE CHOCOLATE FACTORY.

Charlie found some money on the floor

so he went to the shop and opened the door.

He went to the counter and put his money down,

then he went out the door and walked through the town.

He went to his house and said guess what ?

I've got a golden ticket to a lot of chocolot

He went to the factory with his grandad Joe.

It took them so long cause Joe is too slow.

Halfway through he got a lovely gobstopper

he said " it was better than a lollipopper "

He went to the lift that went so high,

it smashed through the glass roof and into the sky.

Mr. Wonka gave the factory to Charlie and Joe,

So they told the family the smashing news

and they shouted " HAROW!!"

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	**MaRiAnN3**wrote: Uh Feb. 8
	james richardsonwrote: *HI BABES ,KEEP MISSIN YA ,,,,,,JUST LEAVIN SOME LOVE 4 YOU XXXXX* Feb. 4
	Billywrote: We Think this is so funny and funnier than a funny bunny! we need some money from our very old mummy.we went to the shoper for a lollipopper but we end up geting a gobstopper! Lol its bbeen a pleasurre to see billys poem and to write this one xxx Love Juicy Lucy and billy willy xx Jan. 5

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